英语作文l want to be

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英语作文l want to be篇一：英语作文 I want to be a doctor

I want to be a doctor

I used to get sick in my childhood, so I had to go to see the doctor frequently. Every time I saw a smile on the doctor’s face, I felt safe and warm. It seemed that the doctor was the only person that the pain should be afraid of. And at the very beginning, I thought I should do something in return for the doctor’s unselfish help. Of course, the best way is to be a doctor. So I’ve made up my mind to be a doctor ever since I realized how important a doctor’s job is.

In the dictionary, doctor means a person who has been trained in medical science and who treats people that are ill. But I don’t think that is quite correct. As far as my concerned, a doctor is an angel who brings patients from illness to happiness and gives the hope to the patients to live on. Doctor himself is the most effective medicine to a patient.

To be a doctor, I know, is not easy for everyone. It requires a kind heart and a difficult process of learning. But I have the faith to realize my dream and overcome all the difficulties I have to face. For me, I’ll treat every barrier on my way as a step of a ladder through which I can achieve success.

英语作文l want to be篇二：I want to be a postman英语作文

When i was very young,my parents went far away from my home to earn money for my family.That time we connect with each other with all letters.By these letters we learn more about our present life.That time i was always looking forward to the posterman who can bring me happiness.Also that time,i confirmed my dreaming of becaming a postman.Ithink a postman can give others hope and other happiness more.I can bring them lots of convinient in their lives.This is my first and further dream,a postman.

当我还很小的时候，我的双亲就外出为家里挣钱了。那时候我们互相联系都是靠信件。通过这些信件我们了解彼此的状况。那时我总是期待着能够带给我快乐的邮递员。也是那会我坚定了成为一名邮递员的梦想。我想一个邮递员能够给其他人希望和更多的其他。能够带给人们很多便利。这是我最初也是更深的梦想，成为一个邮递员。

英语作文l want to be篇三：2015上海中考英语作文+范文i want to invent

2015上海中考英语作文

题目：iwanttoinvent

范文1及点评：

Iwanttoinventaflyingcar

Itisnotuncommontomeettrafficproblemsandseriousairpollutioninbigcity.Itisamusttohaveaplantoimprovetheseriouscondition.

Igetanideatodesignmyownflyingmachinelikeacarwhichcandrivewellinthestreetaswellasflybetweenthehighrisestoavoidthetrafficjam.What’smore,whenitismoving,itcantransformthemotionenergyintoelectricitytodrivetheengine.Thus,itispossibletosavealotoffuelandreducetheairpollution.Itisofgreatusetosolvetheproblemsoftrafficjamandairpollution,andevensavethenaturalresource.

Brightideacanonlybeachievedwiththedeterminationandcourage.Ibelievemyideawillturnanewleafoffuturelife.——新东方优能中考英语左丽娜老师

精彩亮点分析：

亮点一：高分短语

亮点二：itisamust活用高频词

亮点三：定语从句描述自己设计的汽车

亮点四：高分短语

亮点五：beofgreatuse名词结构更高端

亮点六：被动语态，丰富句式

亮点七：turnanewleafoffuturelife翻开未来生活的新篇章-------------------------------------

范文2及点评：

Iwanttoinventatimemachine

Asastudentwhoisexperiencingunprecedentedmodernlifenowadays,Iwouldratherlearnaboutthehistoryandthefuturelifeofhumanbeingfromarealexperiencethanlearnfromatextbook.That’swhyifIcanworkasagreatinventor,inventingatimemachinewillbemyfirstchoice.ThemostimportantusageofmytimemachinewillbevisitingoneofbestschoolsinTangDynasty.Asweallknow,TangDynastyisfamousforitsopen-mindededucation.Therefore,whenIvisittheschooloftheancientcity,Icannotonlytrydifferentwaysofstudyingbutcommunicatewithpeoplefromdifferentcountriesaswell.Usingatimemachineisthemostvividwaytolearnhistoryasitisbotharecordofmankindandamirrorofpast,Iamlookingforwardtothedaywhenmytimemachinecomesout.

——新东方优能中考英语郭娟老师

精彩亮点分析：

亮点一：定语从句修饰对学生现在的生活

亮点二：用wouldrather…than…表达学生的意愿

亮点三：用if条件状语从句表达主题

亮点四：befamousfor因…而著名

亮点五：notonly…but…aswell不但…而且…

亮点六：用动名词词组做主语

亮点七：用idiom突出历史的重要性

亮点八：定语从句表达学生的期待

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范文3及点评：

IWantToInventAFamilyDoctorRobot

Iwanttoinventafamilydoctorrobot,whichcanbeusedtocuretheillnesswithoutgoingoutoftheirhome.Asfaras

I’mconcerned,itwillbe

extremelyhelpfulandusefulbecauseofthefollowingreasons:

First,youcanseethedoctorimmediatelyathomewhenyoufeelsickorgethurt.Itcansaveusalotoftime,especiallyinemergencysituations.

Furthermore,hospitalstodayarealwaysfilledwithpatients,noteveryonecanbetakengoodcareof.However,withthehelpofourrobotdoctors,youcantalktoyourpersonaldoctoronetoonewheneveryouwant.

Inshort,familydoctorrobotscanmakegreatcontributiontooursociety.

——新东方优能中考英语杨洋老师

精彩亮点分析：

亮点一：全文巧用“first,furthermore,inshort”等连接词，把家庭机器人医生的好处写的非常清晰，让阅卷老师一目了然。

亮点二：全文采用了定语从句、状语从句、并列句等多种长难句，为文采分增色不少。

亮点三：文中出现了“extremely,makecontributionto”这些超纲单词及词组，恰到好处地强调了家庭机器人医生的重要性，且为文采再次进行润色。关注上海中考微信（shzhongkao1）

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